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发表于 2017-8-6 14:09:33 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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DearBob, I'mwritingtoyoutoexprseemyregretthatIamunabletomeetyouassoonasyouarrive
    attheairportofmycity.
     Thereasonisthateveryone'sattendencetoareportofafamousscholar,thepresidentof
    NationalEducationAssociation,isrequiredbymyprofessoronthedayyouarrive.Imakea
    promisethatIwillhurrytotheairportonehourlateryouland.Pleaserestinthelobbyofthe
    airportatthenandIreallyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation.
     Foritisthefirstwewillmeet,IhavetoinformthatwearingaredcoatandwithanEnglish
    dictionaryinmyhandaretheindicatortorecognizeme.Iamreallysorryforanyunconvenience
    broughttoyouandlookingforwardtomeetsoon.
    Yours,
    LiMing
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下:

Dear Bob,
I'm writing to you to exprsee(拼写错误) my regret that I am unable to meet you as soon as you arriveat the airport of my city.  The reason is that everyone's attendence(拼写错误) to a report of a famous scholar, the president ofNational Education Association, is required by my professor on the day you arrive. I make a promise that I will hurry to the airport one hour later you land(改成your landing). Please rest in the lobby of the airport at then and I really hope you can understand my situation.  For it is the first we will meet, I have to inform that wearing a red coat and with an Englishdictionary in my hand are the indicator to recognize me. I am really sorry for any unconvenience(拼写错误)brought to you and looking forward to meet soon.  Yours,  Li Ming (位于右下角)点评:7分这种文体中,表达要直白,字数超出的比较多。
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