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Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to apologize for hanving broken the CD which you borrowed me last week. I did not careful that it fell from the table down.Had I paid more attention then,I would not have made such a stupid mistake.
     To crack this hard nut,I would like to buy the one to you.Therefore ,please give me particular accounts as regards name,singers,publishing house and price of the CD.If can not buy it, I can put an exactly same one to you.How about the “the Beatles”CD?As it should be,I will do my best to look for the it.
     Please allow me to say sorry again.I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob,  I am writing this letter to apologize for hanving（拼写错误） broken the CD which you borrowed（因该是lent to） me last week. I did not careful that it fell from the table down. Had I paid more attention then, I would not have made such a stupid mistake. To crack this hard nut, I would like to buy the（应该用another）one to you. Therefore, please give me particular accounts as regards name, singers, publishing house and price of the CD. If can not buy it, I can put an exactly same one to you. How about the （这里有两个the）“the Beatles”（不用引号）CD?As it should be, I will do my best to look for the（去掉） it. Please allow me to say sorry again. I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.  Yours sincerely,  Li Ming点评：6-7分字数有点多了，定冠词要有选择性的使用。