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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Earnest,
Please accept my most cordial and humblest apologies for losing one of your favourite CDs--the album of Michael Jackson. I know he is your idol.
It is my careless to be blame. I kept it in a book which I borrowed from library and returned the book without checking. When I remembered, it was unable to be found.
     I'll buy you another one. I trust the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes. Once again, I am sorry for any unhappiness caused.
    Sincerely yours,
Liming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Earnest（题目中要求是Bob）,
Please accept my most cordial and humblest apologies for losing one of your favourite CDs--the album of Michael Jackson. I know he is your idol.
It is my careless to be blame（被动语态，应该用blamed）. I kept it in a book which I borrowed from library and returned the book without checking. When I remembered, it was unable to be found. I'll buy you another one. I trust the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes. Once again, I am sorry for any unhappiness caused.
Sincerely yours,
Liming（Ming）点评：7-8分写的不错，要注意题目的要求，一定要看清题目要求再下笔。字数可以稍加一点点。