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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
    Long time no see. I am writing this letter to apologize that the book you borrowed me last week was unfounded.
    I was reading this book in a garden yesterday morning. But when I was leaving for a while, the book missed. I searched it everywhere, but even can’t find it. It was really sad about it. I will buy a new one and send it back to you throw the EMS. If you need it soon, how about you buying a new one and I will pay for it? Any more solutions you wanted, please let me know.
    I am sorry for my careless and the awkward things may take to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yours Sincerely,
    Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob,Long time no see. I am writing this letter to apologize that the book you borrowed me last week was unfounded.I was reading this book in a garden yesterday morning. But when I was leaving for a while, the book missed. I searched it everywhere, but even can’t（应该用过去时） find it. It was really sad about it. I will buy a new one and send it back to you throw the EMS. If you need it soon, how about you buying（应该用buy）a new one and I will pay for it? Any more solutions you wanted, please let me know.I am sorry for my careless and the awkward things may take to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,Li Ming点评：7-8分注意控制字数。写的还不错。