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Dear Bob,
I am very sorry to you for my ignoring to reture your music CD. I borrowed from you when I came to your home. At the moment I made my luggage I didn't find it until I have arrived China.
If you don't mind, I can send by EMS to Canada with a Chinese classical music CD. I hope you like it. I appreciate your generous invite and careful guide for me to visit Canada. Welcome to Beijing. If you intend to come, please inform me ahead.
I appolgy for bringing yourany inconvience.
your sincerely,
   Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I am very sorry to you for my ignoring to reture（拼写错误） your music CD. I borrowed（加代词it） from you when I came to your home. At the moment I made my luggage I didn't find it until I have arrived（加介词in） China.
If you don't mind, I can send by EMS to Canada with a Chinese classical music CD. I hope you like it. I appreciate your generous invite and careful guide for me to visit Canada. Welcome to Beijing. If you intend to come, please inform me ahead.
I appolgy（拼写错误，这里应该用动词） for bringing your（用you）any inconvience（拼写错误）.
your （Yours）sincerely,
   Li Ming点评：5-6分基本上是模板的内容换了一下位置，注意要借鉴的是模板结构和思路，不是内容。