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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
I am writting this letter to apologize sincerely for that the book you lent to me was lost, due to my careless and mindless mistake.
Several days ago,I was on the way to the downtown by bus. After getting off the bus,I suddenly became conscious that I forgotten your book on it.Unfortunately,it was too late to catch up with the bus and find it back.For compensation of your lose,I have booked a same one as yours and it would be delivered to your home in one week.
I am sorry for any inconvenience and thanks for your understanding. Yours faithfully,
  Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
DearBob,
I am writting（拼写错误） this letter to apologize sincerely for that the book you lent to me was lost, due to my careless and mindless mistake.
Several days ago, I was on the way to the downtown by bus. After getting off the bus, I suddenly became conscious that I forgotten（这是过去分词） your book on it. Unfortunately, it was too late to catch up with the bus and find it back. For compensation of your lose（这里应该用名词）, I have booked a same one as yours（改成to you） and it would be delivered to your home in one week.
I am sorry for any inconvenience and thanks for your understanding. Yours faithfully,
  Li Ming点评：7分要注意细节，同时提升你的表达能力。