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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to express my apology for my careless that lost your favorite coat.I am afraid thatwhat I have done has acaused many inconveniences to you.
     The reason is that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully.Had I paid more attention then,I wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake.If you do not mind,I want to compensate you at a reasonable price.
     I really hope you will accept my sincere applogy.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    Your sincerely,
    LiMing
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to express my apology for my careless that lost your favorite coat. I am afraid thatwhat I have done has acaused（拼写错误） many inconveniences to you. The reason is that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake. If you do not mind, I want to compensate you at a reasonable price. I really hope you will accept my sincere applogy（拼写错误）. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Your（Yours） sincerely,点评：5-6分把模板的内容拼凑在一起，导致内容不是很连贯。