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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
    I am writing this letter to express my apologies for not being able to the travel next Monday.
Because my school institute give me a notice that the computer test will be held on next Monday,it exactly conflict to the travel time.I feel so sorry to make you disappointed.Additionally,the test which I will attend is very important for me as what you know I have prepared it one month ago. Moreover,I have send a post about the travel destination like the local culture,scenic spots what I think is useful for you.
I cordially hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies.Wish you have a good time on the travel.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to express my apologies for not being able to（少一个动词） the travel next Monday.
Because my school institute give me a notice that the computer test will be held on next Monday, it exactly conflict to the travel time. I feel so sorry to make you disappointed. Additionally, the test which I will attend is very important for me as what you know I have prepared it（加介词from） one month ago. Moreover, I have send（用过去分词sent） a post about the travel destination like the local culture,（改成and） scenic spots what I think is（用复数） useful for（用介词to） you.
I cordially hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies. Wish you have a good time on the travel.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming点评：7分注意细节，积累词语的用法。