考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(407)

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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writing for the opportunity which was advertised by you on you Web site last week. I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you could offer the position for me.
     On the one and, I have the outstanding skill at English listening comprehension and the ability to speak Chinese and English fluently. On the other hand, I have strong professional spirit and cheerful personality. Accordingly, I maintain that the job could be done well by me.
    Thank you for your time and consideration. Moreover, looking forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing for the opportunity which was advertised by you on you（应该用your） Web site last week. I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you could offer the position for me. On the one and（hand）, I have the outstanding skill at English listening comprehension and the ability to speak Chinese and English fluently. On the other hand, I have strong professional spirit and cheerful personality. Accordingly, I maintain that the job could be done well by me. Thank you for your time and consideration. Moreover,looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：7分最好在第一段说明你申请的职位。