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Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to express my regret that I can't attend your birthday party next Sunday. I feel so sorry to make you disappointed.
The reason I failing to keep my promise is that my aunt who lives in America will arrive at Shanghai that day. Additionally, she is planning to stay here only one day and then she will travel to next station. Just think: after several years without seeing, we will finally have the chance to meet.
I cordially hope that you can understand my emotion and accept the apology for my absence. Wish you have a wonderful time on your birthday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to express my regret that I can't attend your birthday party next Sunday. I feel so sorry to make you disappointed.
The reason I failing to keep my promise is that my aunt who lives in America will arrive at Shanghai that day. Additionally, she is planning to stay here only one day and then she will travel to next station. Just think:（改成that） after several years without seeing, we will finally have the chance to meet.
I cordially hope that you can understand my emotion and accept the apology for my absence. Wish you have a wonderful time on your birthday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：8分写的很不错，注意格式。