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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob ,
     I am writing this letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you .I can't go to Harbin with you this winter vacation.
     As I am planning to take the Nationgal Entrance Test of English for MA candidates.It is a very precious chance for me .I want toseize the oppotunity to good review,and I hople I can get good grades.I'm thinking about that, if you don't mind, we can make another appointment to go toHarbin when I passed my exams.I hope you'll accept my sincere apology.
    Look forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you .I can't go to Harbin with you this winter vacation. As I am planning to take the Nationgal（拼写错误） Entrance Test of English for MA candidates.（这不是一句完整的话） It is a very precious chance for me .I want toseize the opportunity（拼写错误） to good review, and I hople（拼写错误） I can get good grades. I'm thinking about that, if you don't mind, we can make another appointment to go toHarbin when I passed my exams.I hope you'll accept my sincere apology.Look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分写的还可以，注意第二段的第一句话，这是一个比较容易发现的错误。最好在最后一段重申歉意。