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DearBob, I amwritingtomakeanapologytoyouforI forgottoreturntheCDwhichI borrowedfromyoulastweek. Today,whenI returnbacktomyhouse,I founditinmypackage.I wanttosendtheCDtoyoubyMailService.Oryoucouldbuyanotherone,andI willpayforit.I wonderwhetheritisconvenientforyoutotellmeyourmailaddressorbankaccount.
      Onceagain ,I amsorryforany inconveniencecaused. Hopeyoucanacceptmy apologies for mycareless. Lookingforwardtoyoureply.
    Yours sincerely
      LiMing
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
DearBob, I amwritingtomakeanapologytoyouforI forgottoreturntheCDwhichI borrowedfromyoulastweek. Today,whenI return（应该用过去时）backtomyhouse,I founditinmypackage.I wanttosendtheCDtoyoubyMailService.Oryoucouldbuyanotherone,andI willpayforit.I wonderwhetheritisconvenientforyoutotellmeyourmailaddressorbankaccount.  Onceagain ,I amsorryforany inconveniencecaused. Hopeyoucanacceptmy apologies for mycareless. Lookingforwardtoyou（应该用your）reply.Yours sincerely（加逗号）  LiMing点评6分错误比较少，但是模板内容用太多了。