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考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改,新东方在线考研频道编辑整理,总有一篇适用你。
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Dear Bob,
     I am writting to make an apology to you for the mistake I made that giving you the wrong address of my office. It is absolutely my fault wasting you a whole afternoon.
     But I have to say that I was really busy these days. I was making a contract whenreceiving theexciting news that you would come to my placethe next day. So I typed you my address ina hurry and excitementbut unfortunally made a mistake.
     I am to visit your house in a few days to show my sincere apology again and havea nice meetting with you.
    Yours faithfully,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下:
   
Dear Bob, I am writting(拼写错误) to make an apology to you for the mistake I made that giving you the wrong address of my office. It is absolutely my faultwastingyou a whole afternoon. But I have to say that I was really busy these days. I was making a contract whenreceiving theexciting news that you would come to my placethe next day. So I typed you my address ina hurry and excitementbut unfortunally(拼写错误) made a mistake. I am to visit your house in a few days to show my sincere apology again and havea nice meetting(拼写错误) with you.Yours faithfully,Li Ming点评:8分写的很不错,注意单词的拼写。
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