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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Wei,
     I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return an English book which I borrowed from you last month.
     To begin with,I take this opportunity to extend my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you render me during my stay in Beijing.What's more,I found to my surprise that book in my luggage due to my carelessness.I am so sorry that you cannot learn it.To solve the problem,I would like to tend this English book to you by Express Mail Service.
     I am sorry again for mycareless.Looking forword to your reply.
    Yours Sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Wei（题目中给的是Bob）, I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return an English book which I borrowed from you last month. To begin with, I take this opportunity to extend my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you render me during my stay in Beijing. What's more, I found（加it） to my surprise that （加the）book in my luggage due to my carelessness. I am so sorry that you cannot learn it. To solve the problem, I would like to tend this English book to you by Express Mail Service. I am sorry again for mycareless. Looking forword（拼写错误）to your reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：5分基本上是模板中的内容，要用你自己的东西。