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Dear Bob,
I have found the music CD borrowed from you a month ago in my luggage when I have just come back home.I’m really sorry for forgetting to return it to you.
To sovel the problem,I decide to send the CD to you by parcel.But it will reach you a week later. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.While, I really appreciate your assistance when I stay in Canada. To express my thanks,I’ll give you some special products of China as a gift.
I am indeed very sorry for what I did, but believe I had no intention to forget it.I hope you’ll like the gift and welcome to China.
     Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I have found the music CD borrowed from you a month ago in my luggage when I have just come back home. I’m really sorry for forgetting to return it to you.
To sovel（拼写错误） the problem, I decide to send the CD to you by parcel. But it will reach you a week later. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. While, I really appreciate your assistance when I stay（应该用过去时） in Canada. To express my thanks, I’ll give you some special products of China as a gift.
I am indeed very sorry for what I did, but believe I had no intention to forget it. I hope you’ll like the gift and welcome to China. Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming点评：与模板雷同。注意控制字数。