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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I'm writing this letter in purpose of expressing my sincere apology to you.I borrowed a book from you last week in school.Unfortunately, when I returened home for summer holidays,I found to my suprise that book in my baggage due to my carelessness.
    I am so sorry that you can not read this book at present.Howaboutbuyinganother oneand I will pay for it?If you cannot find it in bookstores,I would like to send the book to you by Express Mail Service.You can call me if there are any other solutions.
     Please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenieces that I have caused.Hope to hearing from you soon.
   
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I'm writing this letter in purpose of expressing my sincere apology to you. I borrowed a book from you last week in school. Unfortunately, when I returened（拼写错误） home for summer holidays, I found to my suprise（拼写错误）that（加the，前边的that是引导词） book（加was） in my baggage due to my carelessness.I am so sorry that you can not read this book at present. Howaboutbuyinganother oneand I will pay for it? If you cannot find it in bookstores, I would like to send the book to you by Express Mail Service. You can call me if there are any other solutions. Please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenieces（拼写错误） that I have caused. Hope to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：5分模板上的内容用太多了。