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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writer the letter for inform you about I decide to quitepresent position.
     The primary reasons are as follows.First,I fell that it is not easy for me to get used to the extra work and night shift.Second,the salary has lower,and I have a large family to support ,Last,this job is notfail with my interst and my previous training and strength.so,I decide to quite this job .
     plese accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience my leaving may cause.
    Yours sincerely,
    Ling Ming

    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writer（应该用writing） the letter for（应该用不定式to） inform you about I decide to quite（加定冠词the）present position. The primary reasons are as follows. First, I fell that it is not easy for me to get used to the extra work and night shift. Second, the salary has lower, and I have a large family to support ,（改成句号）Last, this job is notfail with my interst（拼写错误） and my previous training and strength. so（So）, I decide to quite this job . plese（拼写错误，首字母大写） accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience my leaving may cause.Yours sincerely,Ling Ming点评：这应该算是辞职信，不是道歉信。