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Dear Bob
     I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I have come back from Canand and I found the CD in my luggest.I am so sorry that you can not listen to it at present.
     The music CD which I borrowed from you is made in Canand ,so I believe you can find another one in your local store.How about you buy another CD for yourself and I will pay for it? If you can not find the similar one ,I will sent it back to you through the post office.And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
     I am so sorry again for my careless.Looking forward to your reply.
     Yours sincerely
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob（加逗号） I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I have come（用一般过去时就可以了） back from Canand（拼写错误） and I found the CD in my luggest（拼写错误）. I am so sorry that you can not listen to it at present.  The music CD which I borrowed from you is made in Canand（拼写错误）, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about you buy another CD for yourself and I will pay for it? If you can not find the similar one, I will sent（will后加动词原形） it back to you through the post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.  I am so sorry again for my careless（应该用名词）. Looking forward to your reply.  Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：5分模板内容用的比较多。另外注意拼写和格式