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Dear Bob,
     I am writing to express my apology for losing your electric dictionary.Maybe in the classroom or in my dormitory,I can't remember where actually I missed it.
     I am so sorry about this because I know it's inconvenient for you to prepare for the coming exam.Therefore,to compensate for my careless,I have decided to buy you a new one with fashionable style and powerful function.
     I would like to say sorry again and hope that you understand that I offended you quite unintentionally.
    Yoursfaithfully,
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I am writing to express my apology for losing your electric dictionary. Maybe in the classroom or in my dormitory,（加but）I can't remember where actually I missed it. I am so sorry about this because I know it's inconvenient for you to prepare for the coming exam. Therefore, to compensate for my careless, I have decided to buy you a new one with fashionable style and powerful function. I would like to say sorry again and hope that you understand that I offended you quite unintentionally.Yoursfaithfully, Li Ming点评：9分写的很不错，但是貌似有比较多的模板内容。