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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,I’m writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you because I lost your magazine which is named “science”.I know this magazine is very important for you, but now it is not easy for me to buy another one in my country. I find this magazine online store, but I don’t know how you feel. I also know in your country might find this magazine. How about your buying another magazine by yourself and I will pay for it? And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.I am sorry again for my careless. Looking forward to you reply.Yours sincere,LiMing
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I’m writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you because I lost your magazine which is named “science”（英语中不用引号，首字母要大写）.I know this magazine is very important for you, but now it is not easy for me to buy another one in my country. I find this magazine（加介词on） online store, but I don’t know how you feel. I also know in your country might find this magazine. How about your（应该用you） buying another magazine by yourself and I will pay for it? And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.I am sorry again for my careless. Looking forward to you（应该用your） reply.Yours sincere（用副词）,LiMing点评：6分模板内容用的比较多。