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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to buy the book which you want.
The reason is that I am very busy these days for my teacher ask me to do much work, so I have no time to go to bookstore. I am sorry that I can’t finish it in time, but I will go to bookstore next Saturday and then buy the book for you.
Please accept my sincere apology. I wouldn’t let you down next time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to buy the book which you want. The reason is that I am very busy these days for my teacher ask（用过去时或是第三人称单数）me to do much work, so I have no time to go to bookstore. I am sorry that I can’t finish it in time, but I will go to bookstore next Saturday and then buy the book for you. Please accept my sincere apology. I wouldn’t let you down next time.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7分写的还不错，但是字数不够 |
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发表于 2017-8-6 14:09:25