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Dear Bob,
     Congratulations! I am glad to hear that you and Jane will hold the married celebration at this Sunday. But the bad news is that Icouldn'tto attend your married party and witness the happiness moment of yours.
     As one of your best friends, I should be present in there. But unfortunately, I have the entrance examination of postgraduate which I have prepared for one year at the same day. Even through I counldn't be in there, I aslo prepared a great present for youto express my best wish. Please accept my sincere apologies.
     I am really sorry for my absent. After the exam, I will visit you.
    Your sincerely,
    LiMing
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, Congratulations! I am glad to hear that you and Jane will hold the married（用wedding） celebration at（用介词on） this Sunday. But the bad news is that Icouldn'tto attend your married party and witness the happiness moment of yours.As one of your best friends, I should be present in there. But unfortunately, I have the entrance examination of postgraduate（加逗号） which I have prepared for one year（加逗号） at the same day. Even through（应该用though） I counldn't（拼写错误） be in there, I aslo（拼写错误） prepared a great present for youto express my best wish. I am really sorry for my absent. Please accept my sincere apologies. After the exam, I will visit you. Your（应该用yours） sincerely, LiMing点评：6-7分错误有点多，要注意细节。