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Dear bob，
     I am your friend liming. I am writing this letter to apologize for I have not been able to meet you on time for talk about run a bookshop yesterday morning because I did not catch the training train。
     This is an unforgivable error. It wasted your precious times and infected our planning. Please accept my sincere apology for this. For adverse consequences of this, I deeply regret and I would like to try my best make it up the loss.
     Please allow me to say sorry again. Yours sincerely, Liming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear bob， I am your friend liming （LiMing）. I am writing this letter to apologize for I have not been able to meet you on time for talk（介词后用动名词） about run（介词后用动名词） a bookshop yesterday morning because I did not catch the training train。 This is an unforgivable error. It wasted your precious times and infected our planning. Please accept my sincere apology for this. For adverse consequences of this, I deeply regret and I would like to try my best（加不定式to） make it up the loss. Please allow me to say sorry again. Yours sincerely, Liming（LiMing）（落款分两行位于右下角）点评：5-6分字数不够。第二段应该对你为什么没有按时到达进行解释。