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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing the letter to apologize for you the accident which I unconsciously caused yesterday.
     Owing to my careless, I am broken a cup to you when I pass down your seat. To make up my fault, I will buy a new cup to you as soon as possible. If you don’t mind, I want to compensate for the cup by offering cash. Please tell me your decision. I am so sorry about my careless for you.
     Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience I have caused. I looking forward to hearing from to you.
    Your sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing the letter to apologize for you（去掉） the accident which I unconsciously caused yesterday. Owing to my careless, I am broken（直接用break的过去式broke） a cup to（应该用of） you when I pass（应该用过去式） down your seat. To make up my fault, I will buy a new cup to you as soon as possible. If you don’t mind, I want to compensate for the cup by offering cash. Please tell me your decision. I am so sorry about my careless for you. Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience I have caused. I looking（用原型，或是前加am） forward to hearing from to you.Your（应该用Yours） sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分小错误有点多，注意细节。