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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
  I am writing for you to express my apologize for your warm invitation of your birthday party which be held next Sunday. I appreciate the opportunity that we old friends can together celebrating your birthday, and I look forward that moment extremely.
However, as a surgical doctor, I must look my patients who performed surgical operation. Besides, I must take part in a training class which may help me pass the National Test of Professional Doctor. Therefore, I may be absent the party of your birthday.// Please allow me say sorry .And let me express my sincere apologize and truly wishes .
Yours sincerely, LiMing
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing for（应该用介词to） you to express my apologize（应该用名词apology） for your warm invitation of your birthday party which be held next Sunday（应该是为不能去而道歉）. I appreciate the opportunity that we old friends can （加get）together celebrating（应该用不定式to do的形式） your birthday, and I look forward that moment extremely.  However, as a surgical doctor, I must look my patients who（who应该指的是前面的patients，这样的话后面就不对了） performed surgical operation. Besides, I must take part in a training class which may help me pass the National Test of Professional Doctor. Therefore, I may be absent the party of your birthday.Please allow me say sorry .And let me express my sincere apologize（应该用名词apology） and truly（修饰名词，要用形容词） wishes.Yours sincerely, LiMing（落款分两行谓语右下角）点评：6分错误有点多，一定要注意细节。另外建议同学看一下范文。