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Dear Bob,
     I’d like to give you my apology for not having returned the music CD which you borrowed me last week in your house. After I came back home and opened my luggage did I find it was still here. How about my sending back to you via EMS tomorrow? To tell the truth, it’s very nice of you to take care of me when I got a cold in Canada, I would be unforgettable throughout my life.
     I sincerely hope you could forgive me for what I did. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please let me know whether my advice is proper or not.
     Best regards.
    Yours truly,
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob, I’d like to give you my apology for not having returned the music CD which you borrowed me last week in your house. After I came back home and opened my luggage did I find it was still here. How about my sending back to you via EMS tomorrow? To tell the truth, it’s very nice of you to take care of me when I got a cold in Canada, I would be unforgettable throughout my life. I sincerely hope you could forgive me for what I did. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please let me know whether my advice is proper or not. Best regards. Yours truly, Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：6分建议按照首页的写作提示的格式写。要参考范文的结构和格式，而不是内容。