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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I will take the Postgraduate Entrance Test next year and some reference English books are essential. Due to my classmates’ introducing , I decided to order these crucial books in your bookstore.
    Firstly, I wonder whether you provide the following books :a function word book , a detail explaining book of reading comprehension ,and a elegant book about writing? Secondly, owing to the long time I will take on going to your store, I want to know how should I pay for these books. Finally, if I order these books now, how and when will these books be sent to my house?
    Looking forward to your reply for my decision.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear SirorMadam, IwilltakethePostgraduateEntrance TestnextyearandsomereferenceEnglishbooksareessential.Duetomyclassmates’introducing ,Idecidedtoorderthesecrucialbooksinyourbookstore.Firstly,Iwonderwhetheryou （加could） providethefollowingbooks :afunctionwordbook ,adetailexplainingbookofreadingcomprehension ,and aelegantbookaboutwriting?（这是个陈述句） Secondly,owingtothelongtimeIwilltakeongoingtoyourstore,Iwantto knowhowshouldIpayforthesebooks.Finally,ifIorderthesebooksnow,howandwhenwillthesebooksbesenttomyhouse? Lookingforwardtoyourreplyformydecision.Yourssincerely,（位于右下角）LiMing点评：8-9分写的很好，但是字数超出的有点多。