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Dear Bob,
     I am indeed very sorry for telling you the fact that I got the bike which you borrowed me last week missed. Yesterday I rode it to the library and parked it outside there. For the books were too hard to look for, I spent so much time. While I got out of the library with them, I realized that your bike was lost! I rushed to hunt for it around the library, but I couldn't find.
     To make up my fault, I will compensate you the money for it or buy the same one as soon as possible.
    Please allow me to say sorry again.
    Best Regards,
    Li Ming
   
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I am indeed very sorry for telling you the fact that I got the bike which you borrowed（应该用lent）me last week missed. Yesterday I rode it to the library and parked it outside there. For the books were too hard to look for, I spent so much time. While I got out of the library with them, I realized that your bike was lost! I rushed to hunt for it around the library, but I couldn't find. To make up my fault, I will compensate you the money for it or buy the same one as soon as possible.Please allow me to say sorry again.Best Regards,Li Ming（位于右下角）点评：8-9分写的很好，语言组织的也很好。最后一段最好再加上I’m looking forward to…的一句话。