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Dear Bob,I’m writing this letter in purpose of making an apology to you for walking on your flowers. I didn’t notice them in front of me and walked on them unconsciously. For my pity, they cannot revive in spite of being set in earth.To solve this problem, for one thing I have bought the seeds of this kind of follower. For another I will look after the follower. Although this one will not mean a different desire in it as the one dead, my pity for the follower and apology for you are expressed by the follower.I look forward to hearing you soon, and express my sincere apology again. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I’m writing this letter in purpose of making an apology to you for walking on your flowers（请在考虑一下使用单数还是复数）. I didn’t notice them in front of me and walked on them unconsciously. For my pity, they cannot revive in spite of being set in earth.To solve this problem, for one thing I have bought the seeds of this kind of follower. For another I will look after the follower（拼写错误）. Although this one will not mean a different desire in it as the one dead, my pity for the follower（拼写错误） and apology for you are expressed by the follower（拼写错误）.I look forward to hearing you soon, and express my sincere apology again. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7分写的不错，注意控制字数，另外注意全文统一flower是用单数还是复数。