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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob，How is everything going？I have arrived my home and thank you for your help me that time in Canada. I’m writing this letter because when I open my luggage, I found your music CD. I’m very sorry for that I forgot to return to you.You can buy another one and I pay the CD’s money. If you just want to this CD, I can mail the CD to you as soon as possible.Once again, I’m very sorry for any inconvenience caused. I’m waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob，How is everything going？I have arrived my home and thank you for your help（这里的help是名词，所以后面不能接宾语） me that time in Canada. I’m writing this letter because when I open my luggage, I found your music CD. I’m very sorry for that I forgot to return to you.You can buy another one and I pay the CD’s money. If you just want to（去掉，want可以直接加宾语） this CD, I can mail the CD to you as soon as possible.Once again, I’m very sorry for any inconveniencecaused. I’m waiting for your reply.  Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：5分模板内容用太多。