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Dear Bob,
     I am writing a letter to make aapology to you for I am unable to take part in your birthday party next friday .
     As a senior student ,we make busy looking for jobs since the beginning of this semester .Luckily,I get an opportunity to be interviewed by a well-known public company which I wish for along time .Unfortunately,the interview is held for next friday .I really don't want miss the valuable chance ,so I have to absent your birthday party .I am absolutely hope that you could accept my sincere apology and receive the gift which I will sent it to you at you earliest convenience by express mail .I believe your birthday party must be hold successful and funny .
    Again ,I really hope you will accept my sincere apology for my absence and happy birthday to you.
    Faithfully yours,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
DearBob,I am writing a letter to make a（用an）apology to you for I am unable to take part in your birthday party next friday（Friday） . As a senior student ,we make busy（用are busy in） looking for jobs since the beginning of this semester .Luckily, I get an opportunity to be interviewed by a well-known public company which I wish for along time .Unfortunately,the interview is held for next friday（Friday） .I really don't want（加不定式to） miss the valuable chance ,so I have to absent（这是个形容词，这应该用动词，或者在前面加be） your birthday party .I am absolutely hope that you could accept my sincere apology and receive the gift which I will sent it（去掉，前面有which） to you at you（应该用your） earliest convenience by express mail .I believe your birthday party must be hold successful and funny（这里应该用副词，funny多指滑稽可笑） . Again, I really hope you will accept my sincere apology for my absence and happy birthday to you.Faithfully yours,Li Ming点评：6分错误比较多，要注意细节。字数超出太多。落款位于右下角。