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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I write this letter to make an apology to you for my rudness. I must admit that the quarrel between us is complete my fault.
     Failing to pass the test puts me into a bad mood yesterday which result to my roar to you. As one of the best friends of you, I cherish our friendship. Could you spend some time having a talk with me to solve the problem?
     Looking forward to your reply.
    Your faithfully
    Li ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I write this letter to make an apology to you for my rudness（拼写错误）. I must admit that the quarrel between us is complete my fault.  Failing to pass the test puts（应该用过去时） me into a bad mood yesterday（加逗号） which result（应该用过去时） to my roar to you. As one of the best friends of you, I cherish our friendship. Could you spend some time having a talk with me to solve the problem?  Looking forward to your reply. Your（应该用Yours） faithfully （加逗号）Li ming（m大写）点评：6分想法比较新颖，但是字数不够，最后一段应重申歉意。