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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
    I am writing to apologize for having not returned the car which you lent to me last weekend to you on time, I was in such a hurry that I did not notice that there is a odd-and-even license plate rule in lace Beijinglace. when driving on the road in a wrong day , a traffic police stopped me and the car was seized by him .
    Now something must be done to crake this hard nut, because I understand it is not convenient for you to livewithouta car. For one thing, I will pay for the fine and get your car back as soon as possible. For another, I can either rend a new car for you instead of the old one or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price for the fee of taking taxi during these days.
    Please let me know which solution you preferat your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.
     Faithfully yours ,
     LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob,
I am writing to apologize for having not returned the car which you lent to me last weekend to you on time, （缺少连词）I was in such a hurry that I did not notice that there is a（用an） odd-and-even license plate rule in Beijing. when（When） driving on the road in a wrong day , a traffic police stopped me and the car was seized by him .Now something must be done to crake this hard nut, because I understand it is not convenient for you to livewithouta car. For one thing, I will pay for the fine and get your car back as soon as possible. For another, I can either rend a new car for you instead of the old one or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price for the fee（用expense）of taking taxi during these days.Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology. Faithfully yours , LiMing 点评：6-7分写的非常不错，但是字数超出太多。