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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
I would like to give you my apology for losing your favorate book " Music" last night.I deeply know the importance of the book to you.I writing this letter to tell you the way what I want to solve this problem.
First,could you tell me the bookstore's address where you had taken the book? I want to try to buy another new one for you.Second,if you want to buy it yourself,it would be greatful if you could tell me the price and recevied my money.
Please take my apologise again for my carelessness.I am look forward to hearing from you soon.
     Yours Sincerely
Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I would like to give you my apology for losing your favorate（拼写错误） book " Music"（书名不加引号） last night. I deeply know the importance of the book to you. I（加am） writing this letter to tell you the way what I want to solve this problem.
First, could you tell me the bookstore's address where you had taken the book? I want to try to buy another new one for you. Second, if you want to buy it yourself, it would be greatful（拼写错误） if you could tell me the price and recevied（拼写错误） my money.
Please take my apologise（应该用名词apology） again for my carelessness. I am look forward to hearing from you soon.
  Yours Sincerely（加逗号）
   Li Ming点评：6分语言表达上需要加强，结构最好调整一下，建议看一下范文。