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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
    I am writing this letter to apologize for missing your English class last Monday without telling you in advance.I was in such a hurry to send my mother to hospital who got a stomachache then.Unfortunately I've heard we got a test on that class.
    So I wonder if I could have a chance for another test,or alternatives to settle this absence of measurement.If a test is not convenient for you,a paper or a presentation seems to be a kind of appropriate choice.
    Please let me know which solution you prefer,or make your own decision.Please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience involved.Thank you for your time,looking forward to hearing from you soon.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to apologize for missing your English class last Monday without telling you in advance. I was in such a hurry to send my mother to hospital who got a stomachache then. Unfortunately I've heard we got a test on that class.So I wonder if I could have a chance for another test, or alternatives to settle this absence of measurement. If a test is not convenient for you, a paper or a presentation seems to be a kind of appropriate choice.Please let me know which solution you prefer, or（缺主语） make your own decision. Please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience involved. Thank you for your time, looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7分写的蛮不错的，字数超出的有点多。