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Dear Bob,
     I'm writing to make an apology to you for my absence of your birthday party which was held yesterday evening.
     My little brother got a headache yesterday,while my parents were still on their vocation in YunNan,soI should take the responsibility to look after him.I'm sorry that I forgot to told you in time.By the way,have you receiveda parcel I sent to you this morning?It's agift I chose for you and I hope you will like it.Moreover,how about have a appointment this weekend in the MoCafe?
     I'm sorry againand wish you my best wishes.Looking forward to your reply.
     Yours truely,
     LiMing
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I'm writing to make an apology to you for my absence of your birthday party which was held yesterday evening. My little brother got a headache yesterday, while my parents were still on their vocation in YunNan（Yunnan）, soI should take the responsibility to look after him.I'm sorry that I forgot to told（动词不定式后用动词原形） you in time. By the way, have you receiveda parcel I sent to you this morning? It's agift I chose for you and I hope you will like it. Moreover, how about have a（应该用an）appointment this weekend in the MoCafe? I'm sorry againand wish you my best wishes. Looking forward to your reply. Yours truely（拼写错误，truly）, LiMing（落款两行全部位于右下角）点评：8分写的不错，要注意细节处。