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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writting to you to apology for my absence of your party.It is my parents that happened to visit me first time this year,with emergency but not letting me know earlier so that I could not have enough time to inform you.Since I know the party is of a great importance for you to introduce your new book, I feel deeply sorry for not helping you around.
     In order to show my sincerely apology, I wish you could allow me to hold another party for you to make a further step for your goal. The same person will be invited and more editors will be included in the list.
     Please let me know whether you like it or not at your earliest convenience.I do hope you could give me a chance to compansate my fault and accept my apology.
     Yours faithfully
     Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing（拼写错误） to you to apology for my absence of your party. It is（应该用过去时） my parents that happened to visit me first time this year, with emergency but not letting me know earlier so that I could not have enough time to inform you. Since I know the party is of a great importance for you to introduce your new book, I feel deeply sorry for not helping you around. In order to show my sincerely apology, I wish you could allow me to hold another party for you to make a further step for your goal. The same person will be invited and more editors will be included in the list. Please let me know whether you like it or not at your earliest convenience. I do hope you could give me a chance to compansate my fault and accept my apology. Yours faithfully（加逗号） Li Ming点评：6分字数超出的太多了，注意你的时态。