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Dear Bob,
    I am writing this letter to make an apology for bringing your music CD home. I was busy packing that day and didn’t notice that small item which lied at the corner of my luggage.
    Therefore, how can I give it back to you? If you were in desperate need for that album, I can choose the least time-consuming way to deliver it. If not, I planned to go back there in the next month, and then I can return it to you personally.
    Sorry for any trouble I caused for you, and I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
    Yours,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to make an apology for bringing your music CD home. I was busy（加介词in） packing that day and didn’t notice that small item which lied at the corner of my luggage.Therefore, how can I give it back to you? If you were（用现在时） in desperate need for that album, I can choose the least time-consuming way to deliver it. If not, I planned（用现在时） to go back there in the next month, and then I can return it to you personally.Sorry for any trouble I caused for you, and I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：6分尽量不要使用于模板中相同的话题。