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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing the letter is purpose of apologizing for you about last Saturday.
     Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your brithday party last Saturday ,owing to the fact that my mother was suddenly taken ill early that day and I forgot your telephone number. So I can't affirm you in the first time.
     I hope you can conceive my sincere apology,if you forgive me ,pleasing with me have a dinner in my home this Sunday.
     Yours truely
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing the letter is（改成in） purpose of apologizing for you about（这里最好加上是因为什么事情道歉） last Saturday. Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your brithday（拼写错误） party last Saturday, owing to the fact that my mother was suddenly taken ill early that day and I forgot your telephone number. So I can't affirm you in the first time. I hope you can conceive my sincere apology, if you forgive me , pleasing with me（改成please） have a dinner in my home this Sunday.  Yours truely（拼写错误）（加逗号）  Li Ming点评：5分字数不够，需要提高你的表达能力。