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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
    I’m writing this letter to inform you that I forgot to return the book which you lent me last week. I feel awfully sorry about it.
    To begin with, I would like to express my heartfelt appreciationthat you were so gracious to extend such warm hospitality to mewhen I was in your home. What’s more, you lent me your favorite book Wuthering Heights, and I was so addicted in it that I forgot to send it back. When I turn back I found it in my personal luggage.I am sorry you can’t read it at present.
    How about I send it back to you through EMS? Or you can by another one at your local bookstore and I will pay for it. You of course, could come up with other ideas you like. Once again, I regret that any inconvenience brought to you, please forgive me for this mistake. I am looking forward to you soon.
     Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I’m writing this letter to inform you that I forgot to return the book which you lent me last week. I feel awfully sorry about it.To begin with, I would like to express my heartfelt appreciationthat you were so gracious to extend such warm hospitality to mewhen I was in your home. What’s more, you lent me your favorite book Wuthering Heights, and I was so addicted in it that I forgot to send it back. When I turn（应该用过去时） back I found it in my personal luggage. I am sorry you can’t read it at present.How about I send it back to you through EMS? Or you can by another one at your local bookstore and I will pay for it. You of course, could come up with other ideas you like. （前面的内容建议卸载第二段）Once again, I regret that any inconvenience brought to you, please forgive me for this mistake. I am looking forward to you soon. Yours sincerely,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：6分字数超出太多。尽量不用模板中的话题。