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Dear Bob,
     I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. I had planed to see you off at the airport and send you some video discs that they are your favorites. But I had to attend a lecture that a famous American professor offered on Wednesday afternoon.
     I know you have come back China. I have missed an opportunity that apologize you face to face. I hope you can forgive me. I want to mail video discs for you by the express mail. Can you send your address to me?
     Please allow me to say sorry again. Let me hear from you soon.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.（不要开头交代一些让别人不知从何说起的事情） I had planed（双写n加-ed） to see you off at the airport and send you some video discs that they are your favorites. But I had to attend a lecture that a famous American professor offered on Wednesday afternoon. I know you have come back China. I have missed an opportunity that apologize（加介词to） you face to face. I hope you can forgive me. I want to mailvideo discs for（应该用to） you by the express mail. Can you send your address to me?  Please allow me to say sorry again. Let me hear from you soon.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：6-7分表达上有待提高。这种小作文的逻辑比较简单，建议看一下范文。