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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob，
      I am writing the letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you.
     I am so sorry that I forgot to return a book,Gone with the wind,which I borrow from you lask week.Unfortunately,taday I have come back from Beijing and I found to surprise that it in my luggage due to my carelessness.
      To solve the problem,I would like to send this book to you by EMS.Or you buy another book by yourself and I will pay for it.We can regard two books as our friendship's witness.Once again,please accept my sincere apology for any inconveniences that I have caused.I hope the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.Looking forward to you reply.
     Yours sincerely,（右下角）
     Li Ming（右下角）
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob，  I am writing the letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you. I am so sorry that I forgot to return a book, Gone with the wind（每个单词的首字母大写）, which I borrow from you lask（拼写错误） week. Unfortunately, taday（拼写错误） I have come back from Beijing and I found to surprise that it in my luggage due to my carelessness.  To solve the problem, I would like to send this book to you by EMS. Or you buy another book by yourself and I will pay for it. We can regard two books as our friendship's witness. （前面的内容最好放在第二段）Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconveniences that I have caused. I hope the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes. Looking forward to you（应该用your）reply. Yours sincerely,（右下角） Li Ming（右下角）点评：6分字数超出的比较多，建议看一下范文。