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Dear Bob，
     My name is Liming.I am your sister's friend.Are you remember me?Last summer,we were study together in the summer camp.I am writing this letter to say sorry for the Jay's CD.Last summer,I borrowend that of you.But,I forget to return itfor you.
     Now,I am living in the rose town.So,I cannot return it in this week.Can I return the CD on the next week?And besides,can you buy it in your local store.I will par for it by network.
     Please accept my sorry again.I am waiting for your reply.Thank you very much!
     yours sincerely
     Liming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob， My name is Liming（LiMing）. I am your sister's friend. Are（用Do） you remember me? Last summer, we were study（用were studying或是studied） together in the summer camp. I am writing this letter to say sorry for the Jay's CD. Last summer, I borrowend（拼写错误） that of（应该用from） you. But, I forget（应该用过去时）to return itfor（用介词to） you. Now, I am living in the rose town. So, I cannot return it in this week. Can I return the CD on the next week? And besides, can you buy it in your local store. I will par（pay）for it by network. Please accept my sorry again. I am waiting for your reply. Thank you very much! yours（Yours） sincerely（加逗号） Liming（名字首字母也要大写）点评：5-6分错误太多了，要注意语法和细节。