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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to make an apology to you for I can'tgo out hiking with you tomorrow.The reason is that I will be occupied in an extremely important examination the day after tomorrow.To be honest,I am really looking forward to going out with you tomorrow.It has been a long time since we came out together.Nevertheless, the exam is truly important.I must treat it seriously.I feel awfully sorry about it. What about another day.Waiting for your reply. Please allow me to say sorry again for my inconvenience I have caused. Yourssincerely, LiMing
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to make an apology to you for I can'tgo out hiking with you tomorrow. The reason is that I will be occupied in an extremely important examination the day after tomorrow.To be honest, I am really looking forward to going out with you tomorrow. It has been a long time since we came out together. Nevertheless, the exam is truly important. I must treat it seriously. I feel awfully sorry about it. What about another day.（把这句话说完整）Waiting for your reply. （这句话放在最后一段）Please allow me to say sorry again for my inconvenience I have caused.Yourssincerely, LiMing 点评：7-8分写的还是不错的，注意第二段的两个地方。