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发表于 2017-8-6 14:09:11 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改,新东方在线考研频道编辑整理,总有一篇适用你。
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Dear Bob,
     I am much sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you lent me last week.I read the book everyday and will finish it tomorrow.But last night,when I came to my room,It was nowhere to be found. I will find it as soon as possible.If I fail to recover the book,I would buy a new one fou you.I also would please afford the payment of the book for you to abtain another one in the bookstore near you home.
     Please accept my sincere apology for my careless.
    Yourssincerely,
     LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Bob, I am much sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you lent me last week. I read the book everyday and will finish it tomorrow. But last night, when I came to my room, It(it) was nowhere to be found. I will find it as soon as possible. If I fail to recover the book, I would buy a new one fou(for) you. I also would please afford the payment of the book for you to abtain(拼写错误) another one in the bookstore near you home. Please accept my sincere apology for my careless.Yourssincerely, LiMing点评:5-6分一般为三段式,第一段要说明这封来信是一封道歉信。
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