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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     Please forgive me for leaving without any words last sunday.It is reaiiy a wonderful vocation that I will remember it forever.
    At the beginning,I planed to spend two weeks in your country,however,last sunday my grandfather did not feel well and I had to go back right now.I was so sorry that I had no time to say goodbye and express my thanks for your generous reception.So next time you come here I will accompany with you to enjoy our beautifull country.
     Please accept my sincere applogy.
     Yours sinceresly
     LiMing
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, Please forgive me for leaving without any words last sunday（Sunday）. It is reaiiy（拼写错误） a wonderful vocation that（改成and） I will remember it forever.At the beginning,I planed（双写n） to spend two weeks in your country, however, last sunday（Sunday） my grandfather did not feel well and I had to go back right now. I was so sorry that I had no time to say goodbye and express my thanks for your generous reception. So next time you come here I will accompany with you to enjoy our beautifull（拼写错误） country. Please accept my sincere applogy（拼写错误）. Yours sinceresly（拼写错误）（加逗号） LiMing点评：6-7分写的还是可以的，拼写错误比较多。