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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to apologize that I will not work with you any longer. Although the position is quite good,I have decided to quit this job.
     There are at least two causes accounting for my leaving, Firstly, it does not fall in with my previous training and strength. Secondly,the workplace is a little far from where I live.Lastly,I wish to apply for a position with a higher salary and more confortable atmosphere.
     I really wish you will accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience my living may occur.
     Yours truly,
     Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize that I will not work with you any longer（这句话像是在说要与某人决裂）. Although the position is quite good, I have decided to quit this job. There are at least two（改成some，因为你后面用的三条） causes accounting for my leaving,（改成句号） Firstly, it does not fall in with my previous training and strength. Secondly, the workplace is a little far from where I live. Lastly, I wish to apply for a position with a higher salary and more confortable（拼写错误） atmosphere. I really wish you will accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience my living may occur. Yours truly, Li Ming点评：6分更像是一封辞职信。