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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob
    I would like to give my apology for my delay in returning to you .I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
    I received your letter long before and I was busy with my work and go on errands in Hong Kong for about half a month,my family could not sent the massage to me.thanks you for you gave me a mass of information about scenery historic site and propose some route of visit for my trip next month with my husband and son.
    Thank you for you preparing for me .i think i would enjoy my vacation and i will send some photos since returning from my travel and send my regret to you once again .
    Sincerely yours
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob（加逗号）I would like to give my apology for my delay in returning（return what？） to you .I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.I received your letter long before and I was busy with my work and go on errands in Hong Kong for about half a month, （缺少连词）my family could not sent the massage to me. thanks（应该用动词thank） you for you gave me a mass of information about scenery historic site and propose some route of visit for my trip next month with my husband and son.Thank you for you（应该用your） preparing for me .i（大写） think i（大写） would enjoy my vacation and i（大写） will send some photos since returning from my travel and send my regret to you once again .Sincerely yours（加逗号）Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：5-6分错误有点多。要让你的条理更清楚一点。