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Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to apology for having broken the china vase. I was in such a carelessly that I broke it into pieces. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn't have made such a syupid mistake.
     Now something must be done to solve the problem besause I understand you cherish the vase enormously. I can compensate you at a reasonable price. If you do not mind, I may send a new one to you either by express mail or nest time I go to England.
     please let me know which solution you prefer at your earlist convenience. And please accept my apologies for my oversight.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apology for having broken the china vase. I was in such a carelessly that I broke it into pieces. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn't have made such a syupid（拼写错误） mistake. Now something must be done to solve the problem besause（拼写错误） I understand you cherish the vase enormously. I can compensate you at a reasonable price. If you do not mind, I may send a new one to you either by express mail or nest time I go to England. please（p大写） let me know which solution you prefer at your earlist（拼写错误）convenience. And please accept my apologies for my oversight.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：8分拼写错误有点多，都是常见词，不要出错。