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第三期 道歉信
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    Dear Bob,
     I feel terribly sorry to tell you that I have carried your music CDhome carelessly without checking my package carefully .I was a client of your apartment last Friday.My name is LiMing.
     I will try to recover it as soon as possible.At the beginning,I seek to deliver it to your house ,but I am afraid that the CD would be spoilt .Also ,I consider compensating your loss with money before concerning the CD may mean a lot to you.Fortunately,one of my closest friend is going to Canada for a short-term visit,and he is willing to help bring it to you .
      I apologize for any inconveniences my carelessness may occur.And please feel assured that CD will soon be returned.
    LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I feel terribly sorry to tell you that I have carried your music CDhome carelessly without checking my package carefully .I was a client of your apartment last Friday. My name is LiMing. I will try to recover it as soon as possible. At the beginning, I seek to deliver it to your house, but I am afraid that the CD would be spoilt. Also, I consider compensating your loss with money before concerning the CD may mean a lot to you. Fortunately, one of my closest friend（应该用复数，前面用的是one of） is going to Canada for a short-term visit, and he is willing to help bring it to you.  I apologize for any inconveniences my carelessness may occur. And please feel assured that CD will soon be returned.   Yours sincerely（加逗号） LiMing点评：5-6分因为这是模板的话题，写这个话题的同学太对了，难免会出现雷同。所以建议同学尽量不要写与模板相同的话题。模板更重要的价值是可以参考其格式和结构。建议第一段说明这是一封道歉信，第二段进行道歉及补过措施。 考研英语待批改作文：